This is the conclusion to the first chapter of NIKKI'S WISH. The beginning is still posted in the Tuesday teaser section to the right if you want to review what's been going on. I feel like it needs a lot of work now, especially after reading everyone's great kissing scenes last week. But, enjoy!
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Tuesday, December 29, 2009
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21 comments:
Awe, this made me cry. I thought the kiss was handled well and I really like this story. I just hope that somehow Sam didn't kill himself. He seems so swoon-worthy.
He..He..He killed himself :(
He jumped!
Noooo.
I really liked the kiss aswell.
*is also hoping sam survives*
WOW. WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW.
...I seriously have nothing more coherent to say, lol.
OH WOW! This is awesome!!! The kiss, the set up - the whole thing! I have to find more of this to read...going to see if you have more on here somewhere...
WOW WOW WOW!!! I LOVED this!
here's some of my fav lines:
"He was soft and rough, boy and man, dream and reality -- all rolled into one being who seemed to dangle just beyond my reach."=Awesome discription
“Tick tock,” he whispered.=Chills!!
This Srsly Rocks!! :)
Oh my gosh...I'm just in shock. This is amazing!!!
Oh man. This is not the conclusion I was hoping for *sob*. Still it was great! I'm looking forward to more teasers from you!
Dude, this is srsly, the most awesome thing I have read in ages!!! I must beta read! I must!!! Gah, it's all there: love, hope, smexiness, anger, depression, suspense.
Haunting lines....crazy boy, tick tock, and I love the idea of an earthy smell of his coat. Very shiverworthy of him being six feet under. I srsly can rave enough about this. The very idea is rave worthy, but the execution is divine!
You rock, girl!
Wow.
AMAZING.
I heart Sam. And I'm about to cry that he jumped! NOoooooooooooooo.
You did just such a good job writing this. Amazing scene!
The kiss was amazing and I love love love Sam. He's not really dead is he? Is he???? q.q
:O Woah! This was just amazing, every part of it. Stunning beginning to a story. Haunting, really.
Oh, that is chilling... if he knew he was going to jump, and how suddenly it makes sense that he would be so unperturbed about everything.
I'd love to read more.
The kiss was described brilliantly!
<3's Sam! Please don't be dead! :(
I am...speechless.
I want to rescue the guy. How tragic. Loved the kissing scene, loved the emotions. This is awesome. :D
I was still daydreaming about the kiss until the tragedy struck. You totally caught me off guard! Great job!
I love this! Lovely voice, great kiss.
NO! Wow I love it but why did he have to jump... *cries*
He jumped???
Great teaser, though. :) Beautifully-executed.
Thanks everyone for your wonderful comments! Krista - if you're serious about Beta reading at some point, then I'll keep you in mind. I'll (hopefully) have a finished draft ready in March. But, I must go sleep now. It's been an exhausting day and I have three kids to get to bed. Thanks again everyone for reading.
Oh no, why did he let go?! I love him!
You just freakin' teased!!! OMG, he jumped!! After that ohwowamazing gottahavemoresohot kiss? Dude, I really heart that guy after only a snippet. Great job.
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